AO4: use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation.

Common trap

Pigeon English: confusing language vs form vs structure: Keep language vs form vs structure clear. Make a claim, use brief textual evidence, analyse the writer's method and explain how it shapes meaning, context, theme, character or comparison. Text-specific focus: Pigeon English is not interchangeable with the other 8702 texts. For this modern text response, anchor the paragraph in urban life and youth, then use brief textual evidence to explain how the writer develops violence. A useful Pigeon English answer can contrast belonging with voice, because that gives the analysis a text-specific line of argument instead of a reusable AO paragraph. Method work should notice how language, form or structure frames contemporary setting. Context should be used only when it clarifies interpretation, reader response or audience response. When comparison is relevant, compare both texts or poems directly: whereas one detail may suggest urban life, another may reveal youth or violence. Keep the vocabulary exact: character, speaker, narrator, writer, poet and playwright are not the same role, and the evidence must be explained after it is selected.