AO4: use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation.

Common trap

Romeo and Juliet: confusing language vs form vs structure: Keep language vs form vs structure clear. Make a claim, use brief textual evidence, analyse the writer's method and explain how it shapes meaning, context, theme, character or comparison. Text-specific focus: Romeo and Juliet is not interchangeable with the other 8702 texts. For this Shakespeare response, anchor the paragraph in conflict and love, then use brief textual evidence to explain how the writer develops family honour. A useful Romeo and Juliet answer can contrast fate with youth, because that gives the analysis a text-specific line of argument instead of a reusable AO paragraph. Method work should notice how language, form or structure frames dramatic tension. Context should be used only when it clarifies interpretation, reader response or audience response. When comparison is relevant, compare both texts or poems directly: whereas one detail may suggest conflict, another may reveal love or family honour. Keep the vocabulary exact: character, speaker, narrator, writer, poet and playwright are not the same role, and the evidence must be explained after it is selected.